Monday, May 4, 2020
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Hi Makaire
ReplyDeleteGreat writing piece. My favourite part was how you described time flying past like a bullet what a great description. I think for next time make sure you read your writing out loud also try reading it to someone else to get some feedback. I am thoroughly enjoying reading all your work Makaire Great job as always I look forward to your next post.
Also well done on winning Blogger Of the week.
Nicole
thank you nicole
DeleteHi Makaire
ReplyDeleteYou had me hooked from the start, a great piece of writing, well done. I love the way you have used similes. You have paragraphed really well and you have thought about what you were going to write. Great work! Would love to know what happens next?
Mrs T
thank you mrs t
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